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Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Hnyarly » June 7th, 2011, 8:09 am

Hi guys:

I'm trying to create a Hentai RPG game using Flash. My idea is to create a Hentai RPG game, but somethig more than just small squared sprites moving, with some hentai CG image for H-events. I think it's more interesting that the sex events would be in the main action of the game.

So, I was looking for a combination of "Hi No Tetsu No Buresu" (http://scgarden.x.fc2.com/project02.html) with "Legend of Krystal" (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/536624)

I've just released the beta 0.1 (it's short, but playable), so I need opinions to keep on working on the game. I mainly need your critics about:
- Main character´s look.
- Game mechanics/difficult.
- Game art (what things I should improve).
- Languaje (english mistakes and errors).
- Bugs.
- Everything else you'd like to comment.

All opinion will be wellcome.

IMPORTANT: No H-events in this version. I haven't programmed yet.

Quick game guide:

Arrow keys: Move
C: Kick
Z: Talk/Open chests.
Q: Combat Stats
W: Inventory.

For more info, check the keys at Setup menu.

I haven't done anything else once you open the metal chest, so consider this as the end of the beta game. Soon more...



You can get more info and test the last version at my blog (v0.385):
http://hnyarly.blogspot.com/p/downloads.html

Thanks.
:-)
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Eluno » June 9th, 2011, 10:53 pm

Looks pretty good so far though the font from the items is a little hard to read. But I'm curious, are you gonna make it somewhat like Uriel's Mitsuko X game? As in, your clothes serve as armor and in a few hits they're gone and once they're gone you get raped easily.
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Hnyarly » June 9th, 2011, 11:32 pm

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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Wootlool » June 10th, 2011, 8:35 am

Great game, is this your first project, because I would like to see more.

Now the next things I'm saying, are just some things I noted, might look a bit mean, but I do not mean it that way:

Maybe the walking speed could be increased, when walking around, it takes a while to get where you want. Not really frustrating, but I'm a bit impatient :P.
A button to skip on text, I'm a bit of a fast reader and I needed to wait for a while before the next text came...
Maybe a little map in the corner to see where you are..
The enemies are a little too long stunned; this way it becomes easy to win any battle...
And a last thing: maybe a button to take clothes off ^_^

It is a pretty nicely made game, it has the potential, but yea, it needs H-scenes! :D
Further this is just a plain good game and I would like to see more of it!
"Woow I´ve got big eyes, did you see my big eyes, they´re sooo big.. OMG I can´t believe they´re so big, it´s just impossible how big they are, they´re just too big to be true!! It´s amazing how big my eyes are, I can´t believe" "SHUT UP, STUPID CAT!!!"
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby berserkfenix » June 10th, 2011, 9:15 am

Okay, a couple of things.

-Gameplay
The vertical movement speed is a bit slow. I know with the slanted-down perspective it makes sense that she wouldn't move as fast, but it's a bit bothersome for moving around. Maybe increase the speed overall as well, since your map is really big.
For the love of god, don't make it so a consumable item that doesn't respawn is a quest item. I don't know if red mushrooms respawn or not, but if they're a quest item they either should, or a non-consumable should be used instead. It can break the game.
Pause the game when the menu is open. If the character can't move, neither should the enemies. However, in some cases it can be part of the mechanic, since you might not want to let the players just pause and heal in the middle of combat. In that case, you should make the menus transparent so the players can see if an enemy is about to sneak up and own them.
Make it so equipment can be unequipped. Sometimes people just want to go streaking, you know?
Reliable damage would be nice. It's frustrating to do 0 damage on a kick, but in some cases it's understandable.
Maybe incorporate some camera controls? It's not that big of a deal, but having extra room to the side to see what's ahead helps.

-Language
The quest giver says bonepain, that should be two words. Or just refer to arthritis instead.
The glasses description isn't necessarily wrong gramatically, but it's a bit awkward. Firstly, I have shortsightedness and didn't know what myopia was until now, but maybe I'm just dumb. Maybe change to something along the lines of "Sexy graduated glasses. My vision isn't that bad so I don't really need them."

-Art
The main character appears to have a really blank stare going on. Try to work in some emotion on her face, maybe have it relate to her health/status.
The clutter/cave/tree art really clashes with the ground texture, since one is cartoony and the other is realistic.

-Other
I LOVE the breathing effect you have on the main character. It's a subtle detail that most games overlook.
The level design overall is pretty good, but you should avoid having paths that lead to nothing, like the one on the bottom right. It doesn't necessarily have to be a reward, but there should at the very least be something different to find.
Are weapons (like boots, if the only attack is going to be kicking) going to be added in later on?

All-in-all, it's still a very good start. I look forward to more and thank you for your work so far.
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Hnyarly » June 11th, 2011, 5:45 pm

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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby berserkfenix » June 11th, 2011, 6:58 pm

For the shrooms:
You don't necessarily have to make them not be eaten. I know it makes sense that the old guy would want things that restore health, but what he wants doesn't necessarily need to make sense. All throughout gaming history, quest givers have been known to ask . Of course you don't have to make it completely nonsensical. Maybe add in some random strange rocks that the character doesn't know the function of until she is asked to gather a number of them, then the old man reveals they are used to refill magical power or something.

For the grass:
Ground is the bane of artists everywhere... I guess a good option would be to take a look at what other artists do for it. One solution would be to have a simple green with a few staggered details to indicate that it is grass. How you would go about doing that exactly... well, again, you'd have to take a look at other artists.
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Darkdragon » June 12th, 2011, 6:19 am

Wow, an H rpg with no H yet!
Amazing!

Seriously though.

It says you got four buttons that are not being used.
Most probably one is for magic, and another is another weapon?

But that still leaves another for cancle/unequip.

I guess It's good for a first shot.


*you've opened the locked chest and..* WTF NO RUNE! (yet)
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Hnyarly » June 12th, 2011, 3:27 pm

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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby KiWolfGirl » June 12th, 2011, 5:52 pm

This is very good for a first flash game :) I will have some more serious suggestions soon but my main tip so far is it needs werewolf lol
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby qinlongfei » June 13th, 2011, 5:45 am

while the opnion of others matter, I think it's more important to just stick to a version of your character you like and at least acceptable to majority of the audiance. If you keeps making change to the main character's look hoping to satisify everybody, you will never move away from the initial stage of development.
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Darkdragon » June 13th, 2011, 7:28 am

Isn't the real factor of whether a perv likes a character or not is if there's lots of sex scenes?
Just make the character semi hot (just not ugly or plain jane, meaning no make up or not a decent figure), and make good sex scenes.

That's it, right?

I mean, look at the gallery in these forums, do people look at the art or at all the sex?
(And in my head, my art is kinda on par with swifts, but with no color. And I could take a little more time on dimentions.)
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby Hnyarly » June 13th, 2011, 11:21 am

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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

Postby KiWolfGirl » June 13th, 2011, 7:18 pm

I am working on a lot of stuff right now and rushing to finish my final project (in flash!) But i promise when im am done, I will make all my notes on the game when i play through it again :)
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Re: Flash Hentai RPG Project

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